-Should education be free?- (^-^)
학생이 쓴 원문
Free education has many pros and cons.
One of advantage is that can give opportunity to poor students. Although they want to take education, people should pay a lot of money to school or academy. Otherwise, people don\'t study hard in free class. That is quite complicate problems for government or school.
However, I definitely certain about that education should be free. For making more achieved country, it should be start as soon as possible. One genius can save or help million people. It was quite famous sentence is the world. Also, I agree with this mention.
A lot of smart children lose their opportunity by economic problems. We should offer to education for them. They\'re our future for making happiness world.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jay! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. I really appreciate the effort! ^ ^
I definitely agree with you. Education should and must be free for all. Especially to those financially challenged individuals who are quite really smart. ^^
-Teacher Jedah
Free education has many pros and cons.
>>CORRECT
One of advantage is that can give opportunity to poor students.
One of advantage is that can give opportunity to poor students.
>>One of the advantages is that it can give opportunity to poor students.
Although they want to take education, people should pay a lot of money to school or academy.
>>Although they want to have an education, people should pay a lot of money to schools or academies.
Otherwise, people don\'t study hard in free class.
>>Otherwise, people/students won\'t study hard if it\'s for free.
That is quite complicate problems for government or school.
>>That is quite a complicated problem for the government or school.
However, I definitely certain about that education should be free.
However, I definitely certain about that education should be free.
>>However, I definitely agree that education should be free.
For making more achieved country, it should be start as soon as possible.
>>For a country to be progressive, this should start as soon as possible.
One genius can save or help million people.
>>One genius can save or help millions people.
It was quite famous sentence is the world.
>>It\'s quite a very famous phrase or statement.
Also, I agree with this mention.
>>I also agree with this statement.
A lot of smart children lose their opportunity by economic problems.
A lot of smart children lose their opportunity by economic problems.
>>A lot of smart children lose their opportunity because of economic problems.
We should offer to education for them.
>>We should offer free education to them.
They\'re our future for making happiness world.
>>They\'re our future for making a better world.
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