Should employers set aside time for their employees to exercise?
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I think employers do not need to set aside time during the day for their employees to exercise. Because working place is where employees work to earn money. Employers pay for their effort every month. Employees should work and do their best for employers. Employees can exercise after working.
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I think employers do not need to set aside time during the day for their employees to exercise.
>>CORRECT!
Because working place is where employees work to earn money.
>>Because the working place is where employees work to earn money.
Employers pay for their effort every month.
>>CORRECT!
Employees should work and do their best for employers.
>>All employees should work and do their best for their employers.
Employees can exercise after working.
>>Employees can exercise after work.
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