Should everyone become a vegetarian for the sake of health or the environment?
학생이 쓴 원문
Absolutely not.
I believe that we should keep animals\'s right.
However, it is not meaning every human become a vegetarian.
Even, human need various nutrients for health.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
Absolutely not.
>> CORRECT
>> I strongly disagree.
>> I believe that we should protect animals’ rights.
However, it is not meaning every human become a vegetarian.
>> However, this does not mean that everyone should become a vegetarian.
Even, human need various nutrients for health.
>> Humans need various nutrients to stay healthy.
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