Should gays and lesbians be allowed to adopt children?
학생이 쓴 원문
as i mentioned homosexual would not better adopt children
in my opinion, i never real homosexual couple but i saw american drama. it is a part of drama not main topic
i know drama is not real but it can be reference.
after that drama i come up their child has become other concept.
their child has the homosexual is natural, and they also become their parents.
i mean homosexual is not illegal not crime, but still now they are abnormal.
this is my personal opinion that i don\'t like homosexual, i mean i can understand their concept, i don\'t care about them.
but i frown my eyes. i said again i\'m not a racist.
come back to topic their child can affect from their parents from childhood.
it is really bad for kids.
they got bad judgement because still now abnormal.
they are sex minority. see? even the word is meaning minor.
for adopting kids i hope it will be prohibit.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
That was truly insightful. I totally understand your opinion, and you are not being judgmental. You are just thinking of the children\'s welfare when they grow up. It is just surprising though because most people your age would not mind if gay or lesbian couples adopt children, but your thinking is more conservative:)
-Rachel
as i mentioned homosexual would not better adopt children
>> >> As I mentioned before, homosexuals have better not adopt children.
>> As I mentioned before, homosexuals must not adopt children.
in my opinion, i never real homosexual couple but i saw american drama. it is a part of drama not main topic
i know drama is not real but it can be reference.
in my opinion, i never real homosexual couple but i saw american drama. it is a part of drama not main topic
i know drama is not real but it can be reference.
>> In my case, I haven\'t met a homosexual couple up close, but I watched some in American dramas and they are just part of it, not the main characters. I know dramas are not real but they can be used for reference.
after that drama i come up their child has become other concept. their child has the homosexual is natural, and they also become their parents.
after that drama i come up their child has become other concept. their child has the homosexual is natural, and they also become their parents.
>> After that drama, I realized that their child has a different behavior. The kid has also homosexual tendencies and eventually became like their parents.
i mean homosexual is not illegal not crime, but still now they are abnormal.
i mean homosexual is not illegal not crime, but still now they are abnormal.
>> Homosexuality is not illegal or it is a crime, but it is still considered abnormal.
this is my personal opinion that i don\'t like homosexual, i mean i can understand their concept, i don\'t care about them. but i frown my eyes. i said again i\'m not a racist.
this is my personal opinion that i don\'t like homosexual, i mean i can understand their concept, i don\'t care about them. but i frown my eyes. i said again i\'m not a racist.
>> I don\'t like homosexuals but I understand their opinions. I don\'t actually care about them and I am not a racist, but if possible, I don\'t want to be around them.
come back to topic their child can affect from their parents from childhood. it is really bad for kids.
come back to topic their child can affect from their parents from childhood. it is really bad for kids.
>> Going back to the topic, the child can be influenced by their parents from childhood, and it is really bad for kids.
they got bad judgement because still now abnormal. they are sex minority. see? even the word is meaning minor. for adopting kids i hope it will be prohibit.
they got bad judgement because still now abnormal. they are sex minority. see? even the word is meaning minor. for adopting kids i hope it will be prohibit.
>> When they grow up, they will be discriminated or judged because of their abnormal behavior and they will become a part of the minority. Thus, I think that they should be prohibited in adopting children.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.