Should governments make laws to protect people from hurting themselves?
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People should have the right to do what they want if it doesn\'t infringe on others.
>> People should have the right to do what they want if it doesn\'t infringe others.
It is not a personnel problem to be hurt themselves.
>> It is not a personal problem to hurt themselves.
I think the governments must prevent their citizens by providing education and post education if somebody tried to commit suicide.
>> I think the government must prevent their citizens from harming themselves by providing educational programs for people who tried committing suicide.
People in the society need to understand why they have to make that kind of decision instead bully them.
>> People in the society need to understand why they have to make this kind of decision instead of bullying them.
If governments make a law, people who hurt themselves have been damaged in their mind more. Because people would like to hurt themselves do not want to live in our world. that\'s why they make a crucial determination.
>> If government has a law for people who hurt themselves can devastate their feelings even more because people would like to hurt themselves do not want to live in our world, that\'s why they make crucial decisions.
The law is essential elements to keep a life of people in an ethnic community. But sometimes, that could make people inconvenience.
>> The law is an essential element to keep the life of people in an ethnic community, but sometimes it could be the reason for people\'s inconvenience.
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