Should holidays be spread evenly throughout the year, or is it better to have clusters of holidays d
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I think it is better to have clusters of holidays during specific months. because It\'s better to take a long break at a time.
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I think it is better to have clusters of holidays during specific months. because It\'s better to take a long break at a time.
>> I think it is better to have clusters of holidays during specific months because it\'s more beneficial to take a long break at one time.
OR >> I believe it is preferable to have clusters of holidays in certain months, as taking an extended break at once is more advantageous.
>> I think it is better to have clusters of holidays during specific months because it\'s more beneficial to take a long break at one time.
OR >> I believe it is preferable to have clusters of holidays in certain months, as taking an extended break at once is more advantageous.
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