Should humans try to protect natural wonders?

2018-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

Do natural wonders mean natural site that is not created by humans like Grand Canyon? I am sure that people must strongly protect them. There is no wonder we need to keep our nature. I don't know what I have to say about it, because they are our world and nobody prove how natural wonders created. I would like to ask somebody who want to destroy natural wonders, what is so important, is it worth more than natural wonders? There is no reason, why we protect it and I believe that all people around world agree with keeping our beautiful nature without any reason. It is people's basic nature toward the protection of environment.

강사 첨삭

Yes, this is something innate to humans, Sir [이름]!

Preserving the natural wonders in our country wouldn\'t only help us gain tourism, but it would also help us gain awareness to protect the environment. This is great!

~Teacher Eunice


Do natural wonders mean natural site that is not created by humans like Grand Canyon?

>>> Do natural wonders mean the natural sites that is not created by humans like the Grand Canyon?

I am sure that people must strongly protect them. 

>>> correct!

There is no wonder we need to keep our nature.

>>> There is no wonder why we need to keep preserving our nature.  

I don\'t know what I have to say about it, because they are our world and nobody prove how natural wonders created.

>>> I don\'t know what I have to say about it, because they are in our world and nobody proved how natural wonders created.

I would like to ask somebody who want to destroy natural wonders, what is so important, is it worth more than natural wonders?
>>>
I would like to ask somebody who wants to destroy natural wonders, what is so important is if it worth more than natural wonders?  

There is no reason, why we protect it and I believe that all people around world agree with keeping our beautiful nature without any reason.

>>>There is no reason why we protect it, and I believe that all people around world agree with keeping our beautiful nature without any reasons.

It is people\'s basic nature toward the protection of environment.

>>> It is people\'s basic nature towards the protection of environment.

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