Should immigrants be educated in their original language or the local language?

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It would be good if immigrants are educated in their original language, however, not many countries do that because of a few valid reasons.

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>> Better:  It would be good if immigrants are educated in their original language, however, not many countries do that because of some valid reasons.

Firstly, immigrants are also the citizens of that country in which they have to reside permanently.

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Without knowing the local language, they might end up failing in adapting themselves in the country.

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A language is not a simple means of communication, but also it represents cultures, people’s lives and the way of living.

>> A language is not a simple means of communication, but it also represents cultures, people’s lives and the way of living.

If they cannot speak a local language, they will be alienated from the local people.

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A language is the most important factor which can decide whether they will succeed in their second home.

>> Did you mean: Language is the most important factor in which they can decide whether they will succeed in their second home.

Secondly, even if we acknowledge the necessity of educating the immigrants in their original language, most countries do not have proper human resources.

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Immigrants might come from various countries where different languages are used.

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Local governments have difficulty finding people who speak foreign languages.

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