Should immunizations remain compulsory in public schools? Explain your answer in five sentences.
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Personally, I think vaccination should continue to be compulsory. If you live in a group as well as public schools, you can become infected with infectious diseases that you are not aware of. Therefore, if you get basic vaccinations, your body will become immune.
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Hi Raina! Thanks for doing your homework.:) See you soon!
Personally, I think vaccination should continue to be compulsory.
>>Correct!
If you live in a group as well as public schools, you can become infected with infectious diseases that you are not aware of.
>>Correct
Therefore, if you get basic vaccinations, your body will become immune.
>>Correct
>>Correct!
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