Should it be legal to marry someone of the same sex? Why or why not?

2018-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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This is a problem I can not decide. I think dating is their freedom, but marriage is a matter of prudence. Because it is a problem not only for me but also for my family.

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This is a problem I can not decide.

>> This is a problem, I cannot decide.


I think dating is their freedom, but marriage is a matter of prudence.

>> I think dating is their freedom but marriage is a matter of prudence.


Because it is a problem not only for me but also for my family.

>> However, it is a problem not only for me but also for my family.

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