should koreans be more open to homosexuals and transgenders?
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I don't want to demand to people be more open to homosexual or transgender.
Likesise I don't want to demand to people be more conservative to homosexual or transgender.
I just wat to people to see as it is.
If some pelples are homosexual I will not criticize them but I will say to them.
If you do sex with same sex, what disease you can have and homosexual is not common and normal.
But If you know these facts and you can conquer these problem, I will not disturb or criticize you.
I will recognize their's character and profile characture
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I don\'t want to demand to people be more open to homosexual or transgender.
>>I don\'t want to demand people to be more open as to whether they are homosexuals or transgenders.Likesise I don\'t want to demand to people be more conservative to homosexual or transgender.
>> Likewise, I don\'t want to demand people to be more conservative when it comes to being homosexuals or transgenders.I just wat to people to see as it is.
>>I just want people to see it as it is.If some pelples are homosexual I will not criticize them but I will say to them.
>>If some people are homosexual, I will not criticize them, but I will say something to them.If you do sex with same sex, what disease you can have and homosexual is not common and normal.
>>If you do it with the same sex, what kind of disease can you get? Being homosexual is not common and it\'s not normal.But If you know these facts and you can conquer these problem, I will not disturb or criticize you.
>>If you know these facts then you can conquer these problems, I will not disturb or criticize you.I will recognize their\'s character and profile characture
>>I will acknowledge their character and profile.
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