Should l need to say “sorry”?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I feel uncomfortable.
I want to change my situation.
But my behavior may give someone inconvenience.
So I have to say “sorry”.
And then someone think that you are not rude.
It is kind of the consideration to someone.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]ny!
Thank you for expressing yourself through writing. Keep up the good work to reach your goal.
Have a great day!
Aki~
When I feel uncomfortable, I want to change my situation.
>>> CORRECT!
But my behavior may give someone inconvenience.
>>> CORRECT!
So I have to say “sorry”.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> So, I have to apologize.
And then someone think that you are not rude.
>>> And then someone thinks that you are not rude.
It is kind of the consideration to someone.
>>> It is kind of a consideration to someone.
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