Should laws about movement restrictions be stricter, more flexible, or better enforced? Give reasons
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Few years ago, during Covid-19, Korean government restricted gathering after 9 P.M.
It was natural things that time.
Because, we didn\'t have information of Covid-19.
However, the law about movement restrictions should be stricter.
Because, It cause encroach human right.
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Few years ago, during Covid-19, Korean government restricted gathering after 9 P.M.
>> A few years ago, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the Korean government restricted gatherings after 9 P.M.
It was natural things that time. Because, we didn\'t have information of Covid-19.
>> This was understandable at the time, as we had limited information about the virus.
However, the law about movement restrictions should be stricter. Because, It cause encroach human right.
>> However, laws restricting movement should be carefully implemented, because they can infringe on human rights.
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