Should news be more entertaining or informative?
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Good afternoon Sir [이름]!
Happy Thursday. ^^
How\'s the weather there?
It is raining heavily in my city today.
The typhoon will enter PAR ( Philippine Area today. of responsibility) today.
Most people will feel gloomy again today.
I totally agree with all of your ideas written below.
Some news are kept from people too.
I sometimes don\'t know whether to believe the news said or not.
Anyway, thanks for your time.
I\'ll talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
News should be informative rather than entertaining.
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There are other programs that are designed and produced to entertain audiences.
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Each program has its own purpose to be created.
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News should be based on facts and neutral as much as possible regardless of which political side they stand on: conservative or progressive, a ruling party or an opposition party.
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Each broadcasting company has its own view toward social, political and diplomatic affairs, so it may insist or claim its own voice via editorials, however, news shouldn’t be biased on its own.
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>> OR: Each broadcasting company has its own view toward social, political and diplomatic affairs, so it may insist or claim its own voice via editorials. However, news shouldn’t be biased on its own.
Today, there are so many different types of media and broadcasting companies, which drive them to compete fiercely.
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Yellow journalism prevails.
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They present little or no legitimate well-researched news and instead uses eye-catching headlines to sell more advertisement.
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They often exaggerate news events, monger scandals, and pursuit sensationalism.
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They are not willing to make an apology for false or incorrect news.
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They are so irreponsible.
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