Should older people spend their money on themselves, or save it for their children to have after the
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I think old people spend their money on themselves.
>>> Correct!
Old people have right to do something as they please, because they earn their money by themselves.
>>> Old people have the right to do whatever it is that would pleases them.
>>> They earned their own money.
The thing which can be inherited is wisdom, knowledge, and the way they live.
>>> Correct!
Their children must learn how to care themselves.
>>> Their children must learn how to take care of themselves.
They should earn money by themselves as well.
>>> Correct!
But I would like to say, the old people should do society some favor. I mean, they should donate their money.
>>> Correct :) !
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