should parents continue.....

2014-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Naomi

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Should parents continue to finance their children after the children are 18? It is defence on the person. but it is not should. If parents can continue to finance to sturdy It is not navgative. However if the children get a job or if they use thier play ativite or enjoy that do not need tofinance them. Actually in my case, my perents help to finance me to sturdy abrode. some time parents help that give more chance to children.

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Hi [이름]!

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-T.Naomi^^

 

Should parents continue to finance their children after the children are 18?

>>correct
It is defence on the person. but it is not should.

>>It depend on the person but it should not be.
>>OR: It depend on the person but it should not be that way.

If parents can continue to finance to sturdy It is not navgative.

>>If parents can continue to finance their studies. It is not negative.
However if the children get a job or if they use thier play ativite or enjoy that do not need tofinance them.
>>However if the children get a job or if they use their time to play or just enjoy they do not need to be financed.
>>OR: However if the children get a job or if they use their time to play or just enjoy, it is no need to finance them.
Actually in my case, my perents help to finance me to sturdy abrode.
>>Actually in my case, my parents help me to finance my studies abroad.

>>OR:Actually in my case, my parents help to finance my studies abroad.

some time parents help that give more chance to children.

>>Some time parents help that give more chance to their children.

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