Should parents help their children plan their future?
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I say that It\'s no. The parents only have to help a financial support to their children. However, Their future plans are supposed on their own. and, They think & decide about future for themselves.
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Thank you for your honest answer, [이름]! I agree that parents just have to support and give them advice. See you! Faith-
I say that It\'s no. >> I will say that it\'s a \'no\'.
The parents only have to help a financial support to their children.
>> Parents only have to give financial support to their children.
However, Their future plans are supposed on their own.
>> However, their future plans are supposed to be on their own.
and, They think & decide about future for themselves.
>> And, they think and decide about their future for themselves.
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