Should parents help their children plan their future?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think parents suggest plans to their children as an elder person is good for them.
But excessive helping could be toxic to any young people.
Having a various conversation with their children and listen carefully their opinion is the best way to help them.
강사 첨삭
Hi Julia!
As a mother, I would love to guide my child for her future. guiding is different from imposing what they want for their kids.
Thank you for sharing your thought!
Have a great day!
T. Aki~
I think parents suggest plans to their children as an elder person is good for them.
>>> I think as elder people, parents should suggest plans for their children that is good for them.
But excessive helping could be toxic to any young people.
>>> But excessive helping could be a toxic to any young people.
>>> But excessive helping could toxic young people.
Having a various conversation with their children and listen carefully their opinion is the best way to help them
Having a various conversation with their children and listen carefully their opinion is the best way to help them
>>> Having various conversation with their children and listening carefully to their opinion is the best way to help them.
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