Should parents help their children plan their future? Please give some details.
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ESSAY QUESTION: Should parents help their children plan their future? Please give some details.
Basically, I think it is better for the children to make a dicision for their future plan
>>Basically, I think it is better for the children to make a decision for their future plans.
or>>Generally, it is wiser if the children will make their own decision on their future plans.
because they have a task that they eagerly want to do in the futere.
>>Because they have a task that they eagerly want to do in the future.
The parents should respect their children\'s thought if that is not much unrealistic.
>>The parents should respect their children\'s idea or decision, if it is too unrealistic.
The parents can advise them for their future but they should give them an opportunity to choose what fits their aptitude.
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or>>The parents can give them a wise counsel regarding their future, but they should allow them to make their own choice that fits their own capabilities.
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