Should parents help their children set goals?

2017-09-25 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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My mom can set goals because I want to be a artist so she let me go to art acedemy.But my dad is only rasing money don't do nothing and he only shout at me. I think my mom is really kind about that but when she is angry it is really scary. ARTICLE2

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]! ^-^

Happy Monday to you!


Thank you for answering your homework.

I have read it well. We\'ll discuss the second article then later.

Enjoy the rest of the day! See you!^^


_T. Mayleen :)


My mom can set goals because I want to be a artist so she let me go to art acedemy.

>> My mom supports my dream. I want to be and artist so she\'s letting me go to art academy.


But my dad is only rasing money don\'t do nothing and he only shout at me.

>> My dad\'s only concern is earning money and he usually shouts at me.


I think my mom is really kind about that but when she is angry it is really scary.

>> I think my mom is really kind but she\'s scary when angry.


ARTICLE2

>> Let\'s discuss Article 2.

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