Should people always be loyal?
학생이 쓴 원문
I absolutely don't agree that sentence.
Yes, Fo living well in social and the work place, we have to be loyal. But not always.
I think must have the self-confidence and to have it, we have to have a strong belief.
If we lost our belief just obey the senior's rule, we might be lost ourselves.
Also, to develop our own career we have to persuade other not obey them.
Especially in democracy country, we don't need to follow other or nations rule(it doesn't mean ignoring the law). If we don't like the rule, and there in a reasonable reason to do not follow the rule. And infringe on someone's rights, we can strike to the government.
So, we don't need to be loyal.
강사 첨삭
A wonderful Monday to you [이름]! (^^,)
How are you doing today?
I hope you\'re fine and everything is going smoothly for you.
I agree with you when you said, loyalty does not necessarily require unconditional support.
Sometimes, we have to be very assertive and careful with whom we should be giving out our loyalty to.
In addition to that, before giving out unconditional support,
we should also weigh if the decision made by a person in a situation conincides with our core values.
I could clearly see that you have taken your time to answer this assignment.
I\'m really happy about it.
You are very diligent and I\'m impressed.
I hope you don\'t get tired of giving your best.
See you again tomorrow.
Take care always and God bless.
~Teacher Charry~
I absolutely don\'t agree that sentence.
>> I absolutely don\'t agree to that sentence.
Yes, Fo living well in social and the work place, we have to be loyal. But not always.
>> Yes, in order to live or exist well in our society and in the work place, we have to be loyal but not always.
OR >> Yes, in order to live or exist well in our society and in the work place, we have to be loyal but not all the time.
I think must have the self-confidence and to have it, we have to have a strong belief.
>> I think a person must have the self-confidence and in order to have it, he has to have a strong belief.
If we lost our belief just obey the senior\'s rule, we might be lost ourselves.
>> If we don\'t stand up for our beliefs and just obey our seniors\' rules, we might lose who we are too.Also, to develop our own career we have to persuade other not obey them.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: Also, in order to be successful in our career, we have to learn how to think differently.
Especially in democracy country, we don\'t need to follow other or nations rule(it doesn\'t mean ignoring the law).
>> Especially in democratic countries, we don\'t need to follow other or nations\' rules (it doesn\'t mean ignoring the law).
If we don\'t like the rule, and there in a reasonable reason to do not follow the rule.
>> We do it if the rule is not very favorable or if there\'s enough reason not to follow it.
And infringe on someone\'s rights, we can strike to the government.
>> When someone\'s rights are infringed, we can criticize the government about it.
So, we don\'t need to be loyal.
>> In my opinion, we don\'t need to be loyal.
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