Should people always prefer new things, ideas, or values to those of the past?

2015-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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As a marketer, I always think this issue. The company always want a new thing, idea, or value, but the client want something different. They want something new but also fully verified. So they always want the existing case of the idea. That is full of contradictions. That makes us confusing. Many people say that they want something new, but if it is really new, they afraid of the idea. So they hesitate to try that idea. So I think people should not always prefer new things.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! (^^,) How\'s your day so far? Thank you for once again writing in our composition board. People are often drawn to the idea of trying out something new but become hesitant in doing it because of the unknown outcome. Most of us don\'t want to do something we are unsure of or unsure about. It\'s part of human nature I guess. Trying out new things or adapting new ideas has its pros and cons. New ideas could lead to new inventions and breakthroughs. However, these ideas could also cause destruction and chaos. While new ideas, thoughts or values could be very beneficial for our growth, it\'s not always necessary to always succumb or give in to it. After all, there are still valuable lessons from the past that we should keep and remember. I guess it\'s the issue between new and old is just all about balance. We just have to be very observant enough to find out which of these ideas will work best for us. I hope you have a wonderful day [이름]. I\'ll see  you again tomorrow. Take care always. ~Teacher Charry (^_^) As a marketer, I always think this issue. >> As a marketer, I always think of this issue. OR >> As a marketer, I always think about this issue. The company always want a new thing, idea, or value, but the client want something different. >> The company always wants a new product, idea, or value, but the client wants something different. They want something new but also fully verified. >> They want something new but also want something that\'s fully verified. So they always want the existing case of the idea. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: That\'s why they always want the existing idea to coexist with the new one. That is full of contradictions. >> CORRECT! OR >> That contains a lot of contradictions. That makes us confusing. >> That makes us confused. OR >> That gets us confused. Many people say that they want something new, but if it is really new, they afraid of the idea. >> Many people say that they want something new, but if it is really new, they get scared of the idea. So they hesitate to try that idea. >> CORRECT! OR >> In the end, they become hesitant to try the new idea. So I think people should not always prefer new things. >> CORRECT! OR >> So in my opinion, people should not always prefer new things.  

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