Should people become vegetarian? Why or why not?

Hi, Bella! ^^

Thank you for writing this beautiful essay.

I agree that becoming a vegan/vegetarian is not that healthy because we need animal proteins to stay healthy.

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~Teacher Charry

I think people dont\'t need to become vegetarian.

>> CORRECT!
This is because, I think if they eat vegetable only, they would have a nutrient deficiency. 

>> This is because, I think if they eat vegetable only, they would have a nutritional deficiency. 
We have to get essential nuturients from meals.

>> CORRECT!
Like a fat, protein and so on.

>> Some of them would be fat, protein and so on.

But, vegetarian has less nuturients.

>> But, vegetables have less nutrients.
Finally In this case, they will be sick or more thinner.

>> Finally in this case, they will be sick or thinner.
So, In my opinion, Working out is more healtier rather than become vegetarian for people.

>> So in my opinion, working out is healthier rather than becoming a vegetarian.