Should people make appointments in advance for everything, or are walk-ins okay sometimes?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it depends on the event. If an appointment is related with our work, I think it is better to make it as possible as specific. It is important to make sure when the schedual start, where is the place, and what topic for avoiding misunderstand. On the other hands, when we travel somewhere, I think it is fine we only have reservation of hotel and transportation. If we have too tight appointments, the travel might give us stress when the schedule delayed. And I think finding local resturant without searching is one of the funny and rememberable thing in travel.
강사 첨삭
You gave a well-balanced answer by comparing work situations and travel situations. This shows good reasoning because you explained that different situations require different levels of planning. Your example about discovering local restaurants while traveling makes your answer more vivid and interesting. To improve, focus on spelling (schedule, restaurant, memorable), prepositions (related to, reservations for), and smoother sentence structures. Overall, your ideas are clear and practical, and you explained them very effectively!
-Teacher Wela
If an appointment is related with our work, I think it is better to make it as possible as specific.
>> If an appointment is related to work, I think it is better to make it as specific as possible.
It is important to make sure when the schedual start, where is the place, and what topic for avoiding misunderstand.
>> It is important to confirm when the schedule starts, where the place is, and what the topic is to avoid misunderstandings.
On the other hands, when we travel somewhere, I think it is fine we only have reservation of hotel and transportation.
>> On the other hand, when we travel somewhere, I think it is fine to only have reservations for hotels and transportation.
If we have too tight appointments, the travel might give us stress when the schedule delayed.
>> If we have a very tight schedule, traveling might become stressful when the schedule is delayed.
And I think finding local resturant without searching is one of the funny and rememberable thing in travel.
>> I also think that finding a local restaurant without searching in advance is one of the fun and memorable parts of traveling.
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