Should people support local busnisses rather than sopping on-line?

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Thank  you very much for writing this wonderful essay and pointing out that people should support local businesses.

By doing so, we help the local economy flourish and provide jobs to more people. ^^

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
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~Teacher Charry ^^

I think people should support local businesses rather than on-line shopping.

>> CORRECT!

Because when we do on-line shopping, we can\'t see that stuff which I want to buy.

>> It\'s because when we do on-line shopping, we can\'t see that stuff which we want to buy.

OR >> It\'s because when we do on-line shopping, we can\'t see that stuff that we want to buy.

Also, when we do on-line shopping, it doesn\'t contribute much to the development of the local economy.

>> CORRECT! ^_~
But, when we support local businesses, it can make a great contribution to the locak economy.

>> But, when we support local businesses, it can make a great contribution to the local economy.
So, I think people should support local businesses rather than on-line shopping.

>> CORRECT!