Should people switch to being vegetarian? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I think it is inhumanity. It\'s because if we switch to being vegetarian, our Earth will be danger because of stock\'s gases. Recently, some news were referenced it and this problem is increasing. If we eat just vegetables our quality of life will decrease and increase the number of stocks but they can\'t eat vegetables because it has eaten by people so Earth\'s ecosystems will destroy.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy.
Thank you for this essay. It\'s very insightful. ^_^
I think being vegetarian should be a choice and should not be forced on other people.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great today.
See you again later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
Thank you for this essay. It\'s very insightful. ^_^
I think being vegetarian should be a choice and should not be forced on other people.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great today.
See you again later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
>> No, I think it is inhumane.
It\'s because if we switch to being vegetarian, our Earth will be danger because of stock\'s gases.
>> It\'s because if we switch to being a vegetarian, the Earth will be in danger because of increased greenhouse gases.
Recently, some news were referenced it and this problem is increasing.
>> Recently, some news referenced on this and the problem is worsening.
If we eat just vegetables our quality of life will decrease and increase the number of stocks but they can\'t eat vegetables because it has eaten by people so Earth\'s ecosystems will destroy.
>> If we eat just vegetables our quality of life will decrease and the number of animals consumed for food will increase. They can\'t eat vegetables because they people need to consume them. As a result, the Earth\'s ecosystems will get destroyed.
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