Should people who commit suicide always leave a suicide note?
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A terrific start to you Sir [이름]!
Thanks for sending this in today.
Actually, I agree with your ideas that are stated below.
We should always let other people know that they have someone to talk to.
I suddenly remembered my schoolmate in elementary who committed suicide two weeks ago.
According to her friends, it was really sudden. They think the reason was love.
She committed suicide because of her personal problems and love.
There was also a message that a person said sorry for not being there for her when she needed someone to talk to.
The last sentence that you wrote is really powerful to avoid this situation.
Have a nice week ahead of you.
Teacher Nina
We cannot say or judge whether people who commit suicide should leave a suicide note or not.
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It’s entirely up to their choice although it would be better for the remaining people to understand his/her feelings, reasons for the suicide and his/her wills for the disposition of his/her assets.
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But, all of these are for the people who are still alive.
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>> OR: But all of these are for the people who are still living.
From his/her perspective, everything could be meaningless.
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If he/she had had aspirations for something, he/she would not have committed a suicide.
>> If he/ she aspirations for something, he/ she would not have committed suicide.
At the last moment, he/she might have given up everything even including writing a suicide note.
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Actually there are some people who take his/her own as an ultimate means to try to let his/her voice heard at the last time because he/she felt that nobody listened to him/her while he/she was living.
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Above all, taking preventive action is important.
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All we can do is teach those around us to share their feelings and show them that they will always have a friend or someone to talk to.
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