Should plastic be banned in Korea?

2023-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Mika

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Not really, It\'s not banned in here yet. But it\'s still proces[이름]g a little bit. Like u[이름]g plastic straw, disposable cup and etc. It looks pretty good because they think an environment in far future. [이름]ce the global warming started, people have faced a lot of disasters.

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Not really, It\'s not banned in here yet.
>>> Not really; it\'s not banned here yet.

But it\'s still proces[이름]g a little bit.
>>> But it\'s already happening.

Like u[이름]g plastic straw, disposable cup and etc.
>>> Like not u[이름]g disposable utensils.

 It looks pretty good because they think an environment in far future.
>>> It looks pretty good because they imagine an environment in the far future.

[이름]ce the global warming started, people have faced a lot of disasters.
>>> [이름]ce global warming started, people have faced a lot of disasters.

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