Should poor people be punished for stealing if they are stealing to feed their families?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, Hong Gildong who is a traditional Korean character, and Jean Valjean in the movie Les Misérables, stole to do good, but I think it is right to be punished. There\'s no reason why there are rules and laws if you don\'t get punished, no matter how much you do for your family or for good. And I think it\'s most important to figure out why they could only go so far.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic!
That\'s true. That is what the law is for, to have everything balanced.
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Of course, Hong Gildong who is a traditional Korean character, and Jean Valjean in the movie Les Misérables, stole to do good, but I think it is right to be punished.
>> Of course, they should be punished. Hong Gildong, who is a traditional Korean character, and Jean Valjean, in the movie Les Miserables, stole to do good, but I think it is right to be punished.
There\'s no reason why there are rules and laws if you don\'t get punished, no matter how much you do for your family or for good.
>> There\'s no reason why there are rules and laws if you don\'t get punished, no matter how much you do for your family or for good.
And I think it\'s most important to figure out why they could only go so far.
>> And I think that it\'s most important to figure out why they could only go so far.
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