Should rape victims abort their unborn children?
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Wow... it\'s a tough one. To be honestly, people don\'t care whether rape victims are having a birth or not. But, I personally think they should have the right to abort their children because they don\'t want to have them. On top of that, I don\'t think there\'s human rights in the country if the government doesn\'t guarantee this.
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Wow... it\'s a tough one.
>>> Wow... it\'s a tough one.
To be honestly, people don\'t care whether rape victims are having a birth or not.
>>> To be honest, people don\'t care whether rape victims are having a baby or not.
But, I personally think they should have the right to abort their children because they don\'t want to have them.
>>> But I personally think they should have the right to abort their children because they don\'t want to have them.
On top of that, I don\'t think there\'s human rights in the country if the government doesn\'t guarantee this.
>>> On top of that, I don\'t think there are human rights in the country if the government doesn\'t guarantee them.
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