Should restaurants limit buffet portions to reduce food waste? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, They doesn\'t need to limit buffet portions.
They could charge customers for food waste.
It could help reducing food waste.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]! You gave a clear and practical opinion on reducing food waste, and your solution was simple and realistic. Suggesting that restaurants charge customers for wasted food shows good problem-solving and awareness of real-world situations. Your ideas were easy to understand and well organized. To improve further, focus on subject–verb agreement and smoother sentence flow. Overall, this was a strong and sensible response, nice work!
-Teacher Wela
In my opinion, They doesn\'t need to limit buffet portions.
>> In my opinion, they do not need to limit buffet portions.
They could charge customers for food waste.
>> They could charge customers for the food they waste.
It could help reducing food waste.
>> This could help reduce food waste.
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