Should restaurants provide more information about nutrition and ingredients? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I totally agree with that restaurants should provide more information about them.
Someone who are on a diet, vegeterian or have allergies wants to wonder and know what they eat detailed. Like me, since Im on a diet, Most restaurants are usually handling instant foods, so I avoid eating out. Even more, even if restaurants are salad shop, I\'m not sure to what they use and nutritions are exact. Because I can\'t see their cooking process. In fact, a few restaurants provide information, most restaurants don\'t provide that. So I think restaurants are needed to provide specific and exact information about their nutritions and ingredients. I think it\'s good to upload information on the Internet like their website. Then, It\'s easier than before that people can search in advance and choose where they\'ll go.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sunny!
I also agree with you. Nutritional information and ingredients are especially necessary now that people are more health-conscious. I think it would be nice, as you said, if restaurants could upload this information online. However, I understand that it might be bothersome for restaurants, so many owners might resist it. Hopefully, though, it could become possible in the future.
- T. Caitlyn
I totally agree with that restaurants should provide more information about them.
>> I totally agree that restaurants should provide more information about them.
Someone who are on a diet, vegeterian or have allergies wants to wonder and know what they eat detailed.
Someone who are on a diet, vegeterian or have allergies wants to wonder and know what they eat detailed.
>> Someone who is on a diet, vegetarian, or has allergies wants to know in detail what they are eating.
Like me, since Im on a diet, Most restaurants are usually handling instant foods, so I avoid eating out.
>> Like me, since I’m on a diet, most restaurants usually serve instant foods, so I avoid eating out.
Even more, even if restaurants are salad shop, I\'m not sure to what they use and nutritions are exact. Because I can\'t see their cooking process.
>> Moreover, even if a restaurant is a salad shop, I’m not sure what ingredients they use or whether the nutritional information is accurate because I can’t see their cooking process.
In fact, a few restaurants provide information, most restaurants don\'t provide that.
>> In fact, only a few restaurants provide this information; most do not.
So I think restaurants are needed to provide specific and exact information about their nutritions and ingredients.
>> So I think restaurants need to provide specific and accurate information about their nutrition and ingredients.
I think it\'s good to upload information on the Internet like their website.
>> I think it would be good for restaurants to upload this information on the Internet, such as on their website.
Then, It\'s easier than before that people can search in advance and choose where they\'ll go.
>> Then, it would be easier for people to search in advance and decide where to go.
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