Should rich people and corporations be forced to give to charity? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is very difficult to answer. Because I consider both of them. It means First, I think the rich people and corporations should give to charity. Because a person who have a lot of thing must share their own to the poor. If It is, the world must be rich and beautiful. Second I also think the charity wasn't forced anyother. So if I only saw the qestion, I can say "Rich people and corporations shouldn't be forced to give to charity." The best way is the rich people and corporations give to charity voluntarily. Though if they pursue other thing not a serve like a good image.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]!
Thanks for expressing your opinion about this matter.
You have a point there. ^_^ Nobody should force someone to do something. ^_^
Well, let\'s enjoy the rest of the day!
See you on Monday!
~T. Jessie~
It is very difficult to answer.
>> Correct!
Because I consider both of them.
>> Correct!
It means First, I think the rich people and corporations should give to charity.
>> I mean, first, I think that the rich people and corporations should give to charity.
Because a person who have a lot of thing must share their own to the poor.
>> Because a person who has a lot of things must share what they have to the poor.
If It is, the world must be rich and beautiful.
>> If it happens, the world might be rich and beautiful.
Second I also think the charity wasn\'t forced anyother.
>> Second I also think that charity shouldn\'t be forced.
So if I only saw the qestion, I can say \"Rich people and corporations shouldn\'t be forced to give to charity.\"
>> So if I only see the question, I can say \"Rich people and corporations shouldn\'t be forced to give to charity.\"
The best way is the rich people and corporations give to charity voluntarily.
>> The best way is for the rich people and corporations to give to charities voluntarily.
Though if they pursue other thing not a serve like a good image.
>> Do you mean: If they pursue other things, then it will not serve as a good image.
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