Should schools have more field trips? Why?
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I want schools have more field trips.because I don\'t want study.Than,I want schools have more field trips.
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Hello Ji Ho,
When I was in school, I always wanted to have field trips and events, too. Just like you, I find these things more fun than studying. One of the most memorable field trips I had, was when we visited a famous amusement park here in the Philippines.
-Chammy
I want schools have more field trips.
>>I want schools to have more field trips.
because I don\'t want study.
>>because I don\'t want to study.
Than,I want schools have more field trips.
>>Then, I want schools to have more field trips.
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