Should schools should have dress code?
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I think people who involved students topically need to set a dress code
as the time,place of occurrence.
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I think people who involved students topically need to set a dress code
>> I think people including students typically need to set a dress code.
as the time,place of occurrence.
as the time,place of occurrence.
>> It should depend on the time, place and occasion.
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