Should smoking cannabis be a criminal offence?
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Cannabis is a crime because it is a drug. And I hope that smoking is a crime. Because indirect smoking hurts others.
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Cannabis is a crime because it is a drug. And I hope that smoking is a crime. Because indirect smoking hurts others.
>> Smoking cannabis is a crime because it is a drug. I hope the government will also make smoking a crime because secondhand smoking can also affect people\'s lives.
I\'m so, so relly sorry.. 😢😰 I was watching a movie, so I completely forgot about it... );
>> I\'m really sorry. I was watching a movie when you gave this homework to me. So, I completely forgot about it.
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