Should smoking-related illnesses be treated by the state?

Hi Sir [이름]!

Thank you for a great composition.

I learned a lot of things from our conversation this week.

You are right! The government should be mindful of the health of the citizens.

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Teacher Nina

This is an excellent subject to discuss.

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Some non-smokers might raise the question why they should pay for the treatment of smokers’ illness or diseases caused by smoking.

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Smoking was their own choice, not forced by anyone.

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So, he/she holds himself/herself accountable for the consequence.

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They are so brazen if they ask for support for their wrong doings.

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The same question may apply to other welfare programs like a national medical insurance program or a monetary subsidy for the poor.

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In the civilized and capitalistic society, an individual is guaranteed rights to pursue wealth through legitimate ways.

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All have the same and fair opportunities.

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If he is poor, then it’s his/her fault.

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So my money shouldn’t be paid to those who are lazy and irresponsible for his/her own behavior.

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It, at a glance, sounds a legitimate accusation.

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However, we treat them as patients like alcohol abusers or drug addicts. 

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If the government is so mindful of its citizens’ health, it should ban selling tobacco.

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