Should students get limited access to the Internet?
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In my opinion I guess we don\'t have to. Because they will find an way how to get access to the Internet even if it\'s blocked. For example when we were younger, we used to be limited about video for adults, violent of games and gamble. But I\'m sure that people tend to want more when told not to. So it doesn\'t need. Also their parents have a responsibility to do that.
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In my opinion I guess we don\'t have to. Because they will find an way how to get access to the Internet even if it\'s blocked.
>> In my opinion, I guess we don\'t have to limit the student\'s access to the internet because they will still find a way to get access to the internet even if it\'s blocked.
For example when we were younger, we used to be limited about video for adults, violent of games and gamble. But I\'m sure that people tend to want more when told not to.
>> For example, when we were younger we also had limited access to adult videos, violent games, and online gambling but I\'m sure that people tend to do more of their capabilities even when told not to.
So it doesn\'t need. Also their parents have a responsibility to do that.
>> So, for me it doesn\'t need to limit the student\'s access to the internet. Parents should also be responsible for that.
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