Should teachers allow students to eat in class?
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>>A class is an important institution where there is an interaction between teachers and students.
It forms a social relationship among students.
>>It forms a social relationship with students.
Teachers teach students through classes and students learn and earn knowledge through teachers by participating in classes.
>>Teachers teach students in class, students learn and earn knowledge through their teachers by participating in class.
Since teachers and students communicate through classes, classes should be faultless and strict.
>>Since teachers and students communicate in class, classes should be faultless and strict.
They should be strict enough for students to behave properly as a social person.
>>They should be strict enough to students in order for the students to behave properly.
Teachers shouldn\'t allow students to eat in class because it prevents students from participating in class.
>>correct
Students would be more focused on eating instead of concentrating on their teachers to learn.
>>Students would be more focused on eating instead of concentrating on their teacher\'s lessons.
Moreover, students will regard classes as nonrigorous institutions.
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Moreover, students will regard classes as non-rigorous institutions.
As a result, students won\'t be able to realize the importance of focusing on classes.
>>As a result, students won\'t be able to realize the importance of focusing on their classes.
Teachers shouldn\'t also allow students to eat in class because classes are strict institutions.
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Teachers shouldn\'t also allow students to eat in class because they need to respect the institution.
Eating in front of teachers while teachers are teaching is an impolite behavior.
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Eating in front of teachers, while they are teaching is an impolite behavior.
It\'s not respecting their teachers.
>>It is not the right way to show respect.
Teachers shouldn\'t allow students to eat in class for the development of students\' attitude towards the learning.
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Teachers shouldn\'t allow students to eat in class for the development of the students\' attitude/s towards learning.
Learning while eating is an inappropriate way to learn.
>>correct
In the true sense of learning, is interacting by communicating through classes.
>>The true of sense of
learning is by interacting and communicating/participating during/in classes.^^
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