Should texting and driving be illegal?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, it should be illegal. While driving, there are many dangerous. So when we drive, we have to focus only on driving for people\'s lives. In other words, you shouldn\'t text while driving. That behavior puts someone in danger.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Julia! It\'s so nice to know your opinion about this matter. I totally agree with you that this behavior which is texting while driving should be illegal to avoid car accidents. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Keep safe and see you soon!
Yes, it should be illegal.
>>Correct!
While driving, there are many dangerous.
>>Texting while driving is so dangerous.
So when we drive, we have to focus only on driving for people\'s lives.
>>So when we drive, we have to focus on the road to avoid people getting into car accidents.
In other words, you shouldn\'t text while driving.
>>Correct!
OR>>In other words, we shouldn\'t text while driving.
That behavior puts someone in danger.
>>That behavior may put someone in danger.
>>Correct!
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