Should the death sentence be implemented globally?
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I don\'t think so. If it\'s the best way to prevent crimes, all of the countries should do that. But, it didn\'t do that. I think it should only be implemented in countries with high crime rates. I\'m not sure that it could affect the rates of crime, it can prevent.
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I don\'t think so.
>>> CORRECT.
If it\'s the best way to prevent crimes, all of the countries should do that.
>>> CORRECT.
But, it didn\'t do that.
>>> But it\'s not like that.
I think it should only be implemented in countries with high crime rates.
>>> CORRECT.
I\'m not sure that it could affect the rates of crime, it can prevent.
>>> I\'m not sure that it could affect the rates of crime, but it can prevent them.
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