Should the fashion industry use models that look more like regular people? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
No. It\'s because if we change the model who has regular body, some people may think it is objective and realistic but others don\'t think it is good. Because the model is too normal so fashion industry cannot earn more money. So I think the fashion industry should not change the model.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Daisy. ^^
Thank you for taking the time to answer this essay question.
I honestly think this question is a bit controversial because there are some people who like it but there are also some people who don\'t like it.
Thank you for taking the time to answer this essay question.
I honestly think this question is a bit controversial because there are some people who like it but there are also some people who don\'t like it.
I understand why the fashion industry uses models that look perfect because it\'s part of their advertising strategy.
Anyhow, I hope this day wasn\'t too much for you.
I\'ll see you in class later my dear. ^^
Anyhow, I hope this day wasn\'t too much for you.
I\'ll see you in class later my dear. ^^
~Teacher Charry
>> No, they shouldn\'t.
It\'s because if we change the model who has regular body, some people may think it is objective and realistic but others don\'t think it is good.
>> It\'s because if they change their models with those who have regular bodies, some people may think it is objective and realistic but others will think it is not good.
Because the model is too normal so fashion industry cannot earn more money.
>> Because the model looks too normal, the fashion industry will not earn more money.
So I think the fashion industry should not change the model.
>> So I think the fashion industry should not change their models.
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