Should the government be involved in making laws to regulate moral behavior?

2018-01-26 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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This is very controversial topics at all the times. I don't think government have to be involved in making laws to moral behavior. Law is a binding custom or practice of a community. It means that people are able to create a law whenever the member of community agree about the issues. It government controls the moral behavior of people, citizen in the country will be daunted. Because everything could be a law and it may make people reluctant. For example, If government control the rate of baby born, I guess people think that they are infringed their freedom or liberty. Furthermore, If we need to say hello very politely to the adults even though we don't have any relationship with them, people will be in the panic and it will be really inconvenient. In conclusion, I think that the government should try to increase the value of people and then we don't need to make the laws regarding moral behavior.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]!
That\'s right! People should have freedom into everything we want to do. We are responsible to act accordingly to people that surround us. Have a blast this weekend!
~Teacher Eunice

This is very controversial topics at all the times.
>> This is a very controversial topic at all times.
I don\'t think government have to be involved in making laws to moral behavior.
>> I don\'t think government have to be involved in making laws to regulate moral behavior.
Law is a binding custom or practice of a community.
>> Correct!
It means that people are able to create a law whenever the member of community agree about the issues.
>> It means that people are able to create a law whenever the members of the community agreed to these issues.
It government controls the moral behavior of people, citizen in the country will be daunted.

>> The government controls the moral behavior of people, so citizen in the country will be daunted.
Because everything could be a law and it may make people reluctant.
>> Because everything could be a law and it makes people reluctant.
For example, If government control the rate of baby born, I guess people think that they are infringed their freedom or liberty.
>> For example, If the government controls the rate of the baby born in our country then I guess people think that they infringed their freedom or liberty.
Furthermore, If we need to say hello very politely to the adults even though we don\'t have any relationship with them, people will be in the panic and it would be really inconvenient.
>> Furthermore, If we need to say hello politely to the adults even though we don\'t have any relationship with them, people will be panicking and it would be really inconvenient.
In conclusion, I think that the government should try to increase the value of people and then we don\'t need to make the laws regarding moral behavior.
>> In conclusion, I think the government should try to increase the value of people and then we don\'t need to make laws regarding moral behavior.

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