Should the government place a tax or a higher tax on junk food and fatty snacks?

2018-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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I don't ag[이름] with place additional tax on junk food and fatty snacks. Of course junk food and fatty snacks are not good for people's health. But It's also someone's preferred food. So I think someone's preference shold be respected. As an alternative wat, If the government use public service advertisement about danger of junk food, I think it will be helpful.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Jane!

Yes, I do ag[이름] with you.

I think it would be better to remind people about the danger of junk food and fatty snacks.

Some people can\'t really resist eating them because they are delicious.

Have a lovely weekend!

_Teacher Dianne ^^

I don\'t ag[이름] with place additional tax on junk food and fatty snacks.

>> I don\'t ag[이름] with placing additional tax on junk food and fatty snacks.
Of course, junk food and fatty snacks are not good for people\'s health.

>> correct
But It\'s also someone\'s preferred food.

>> But, it\'s also someone\'s preferred food.

>> or: But, it\'s also someone\'s preference.
So I think someone\'s preference shold be respected.

>> So, I think someone\'s preference should be respected.
As an alternative wat, If the government use public service advertisement about danger of junk food, I think it will be helpful.

>> As an alternative way, if the government use public service advertisements about the danger of junk food, I think it will be helpful.

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