Should the law consider the child’s wishes, even if the child is no longer alive? (like a will and t
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Even though they are deceased and cannot make verbal testimony, children’s wishes must be prioritized. Therefore, it is up to them to inherit whoever they prefer. According to the research, when children pass away, their wealth passes based on the Will which specify what will happen to all estates when a person passes away. This letter provides certainty and transparency. However, if there is no Will, there are orders of inheritance which start from children and pass on to the legal guardians if there are no offspring. And this is the stage when the family face conflicts. Like Koo-Hara, divorced parents might fight for their part. Alongside this, some of the families of Sewol Ferry incidents experienced this kind of conflict too. Even juries use a financial statement and testimony as proof, there can be a limitation to fully understand whether parents accomplished obligation of supporting their own children. To prevent confusion, it would be best if children left letters of wishes.
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Thank you for this, Aciel. Good luck there. Take a rest if you can. Have a good one!
Even though they are deceased and cannot make verbal testimony, children’s wishes must be prioritized.
>>> Even though they are deceased and cannot make a verbal testimony, children’s wishes must be prioritized.
Therefore, it is up to them to inherit whoever they prefer.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Therefore, it is up to them to bequeath whoever they prefer. (bequeath - To give property, money, or assets to someone through a will when you die.)
According to the research, when children pass away, their wealth passes based on the Will which specify what will happen to all estates when a person passes away.
>>> According to the research, when children pass away, their wealth will be passed based on the Will which specifies what will happen to all estates when a person passes away.
>>> OR: According to the research, when children pass away, their wealth is distributed based on the will, which specifies what will happen to all assets when a person dies.
This letter provides certainty and transparency.
>>> correct
>>> OR: This document provides certainty and transparency.
However, if there is no Will, there are orders of inheritance which start from children and pass on to the legal guardians if there are no offspring.
>>> OR: However, if there is no will, there is an order of inheritance that starts with the children’s descendants and then passes on to the legal guardians if there are no offspring.
And this is the stage when the family face conflicts.
>>> correct
>>> OR: This is where families often face conflicts.
Like Koo-Hara, divorced parents might fight for their part.
>>> correct
>>> OR: For example, in the case of Koo Hara, her divorced parents fought over their share.
Alongside this, some of the families of Sewol Ferry incidents experienced this kind of conflict too.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Similarly, some families of the Sewol Ferry victims experienced the same kind of conflict.
Even juries use a financial statement and testimony as proof, there can be a limitation to fully understand whether parents accomplished obligation of supporting their own children.
>>> OR: Even though juries use financial statements and testimonies as evidence, there are limitations in fully understanding whether parents fulfilled their obligation to support their children.
To prevent confusion, it would be best if children left letters of wishes.
>>> correct
>>> OR: To prevent confusion, it would be best if children left letters expressing their wishes.
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