Should the minimum wage be raised? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. It\'s because some people who has poor home environment. If we don\'t raise the minimum wage, they won\'t be able to live comfortably. I think it is little bit sad happen. So I think government has to raise the minimum wage even a little.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Daisy.
Thank you for diligently writing an essay regarding this issue.
It\'s sad that many people can\'t live comfortably because their meager wages won\'t allow them too.
I also agree that the minimum wages should be increased to a decent level to help improve the people\'s quality of living.
Thank you for diligently writing an essay regarding this issue.
It\'s sad that many people can\'t live comfortably because their meager wages won\'t allow them too.
I also agree that the minimum wages should be increased to a decent level to help improve the people\'s quality of living.
I hope you\'re doing well. See you again later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
~Teacher Charry
>> Yes, the minimum wage should be raised.
It\'s because some people who has poor home environment.
>> [Do you mean]: It\'s because some people are in a poor state of living.
If we don\'t raise the minimum wage, they won\'t be able to live comfortably.
>> CORRECT!
I think it is little bit sad happen.
>> I think it is a little sad that this happens.
OR >> I think it is a bit sad that this happens.
So I think government has to raise the minimum wage even a little.
>> So, I think the government has to raise the minimum wage even a little.
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