Should the use of species of animals be forbidden for research purposes and cruel experiments? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I thought that animal experiment is essential for human health because it is the first step to do before apply it for human. There are a lot of clinical trial using animals in order to introduce it to the human body. We all believe that to apply new medication or a medical technique, pre-experiment should be performed to ensure if it is safe. However, I have found out many professionals who insisted that there are alternative way to prove safety. I know don\'t if it is true but I think doctors and researchers need to consider alternative way if it makes sense. Animals also are life like humans. I don\'t think that humans have right to kill animal\'s life. So, humans have to find another way to do their research instead of animals. Many research prove that the use of species of animals is not appropriate way and effective.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I thought that animal experiment is essential for human\'s health because it is the first step to do before applying it to humans.
>>> CORRECT
There are a lot of clinical trials using animals in order to introduce it to the human body.
>>> CORRECT
We all believe that to apply a new medication or a medical technique, pre-experiment should be performed to ensure its safety.
>>> CORRECT
However, I have found out many professionals who insisted that there are alternative ways to prove safety.
>>> CORRECT
I don\'t know if it is true but I think doctors and researchers need to consider alternative ways if it makes sense.
>>> CORRECT
Animals also are life like humans.
>>> CORRECT
I don\'t think that humans have the right to kill animals.
>>> CORRECT
So, humans have to find another way to do their research instead of animals.
>>> CORRECT
Many research prove that the use of species of animals is not an appropriate way and effective.
>>> CORRECT
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