Should the use of species of animals be forbidden for research purposes and cruel experiments? Why?

2020-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

학생이 쓴 원문

All animals are a life form, I think that humans try to prevent every species with all the ways we can do. However, some animals are known as food for humans. Many people think that they can\'t live with out eating meats because it contains many nutrient and is delicious. I heard that we can take all nutrients from vegetables. It means that meats are not essential food to keep human\'s body. But in regard to research purposes, use of species of animals is crucial, because just think about using human phantom, can we imagine research with human. We have law about human dignity. There is no alternative way to prevent human disease and to treat it. This is the only way to invent vaccine, treatment medication and so on. It can be too harsh for animals, but we believe that humans are only species that can think with brain.

강사 첨삭

Good day~! Your ideas are commendable for this! Good job!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

All animals are a life form, I think that humans try to prevent every species with all the ways we can do.

>>>All animals are a life form, I think that humans try to prevent the use every species with all the ways we can do.

However, some animals are known as food for humans.

>>> CORRECT

Many people think that they can\'t live with out eating meat because it contains many nutrients and is delicious.

>>> CORRECT

I heard that we can get all the nutrients from vegetables.

>>> CORRECT

It means that meat is not essential food to keep human\'s body.

>>> CORRECT
But with regards to research purposes, the use of species of animals is crucial, because just think about using human phantom, can we imagine the same research with humans.

>>> CORRECT

We have a law about human dignity.

>>> CORRECT

There is no alternative way to prevent human disease and to treat it.

>>> CORRECT

This is the only way to invent vaccine, treatment medication and so on.

>>> CORRECT

It can be too harsh for animals, but we believe that humans are only species that can think rationally.

>>> CORRECT

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