Should there be a dress code in places such as school, restaurants, and places of business? Why or w

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I’m somewhat on the side of supporting the argument that there should be a dress code in places such as school, restaurants, and places of business.

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However, I hope that the rule should be implemented with some flexibility, rather than be strictly applied.

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So, the moderate level of deviation should be always allowed.

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Even at a work place, there is a proper dress code depending on the nature of your business.

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If you company interacts with customers a lot, you should dress up professionally.

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If you are working for a company that focuses more on creativity like an IT industry and so on, you can wear freely without any restrictions.

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In school, I think it’s better for students to wear school uniforms although they do not like it.

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Students say it is very hard and unreasonable for them to obey the rule and confines their freedom of choice for cloths.

>> Students say it is very hard and unreasonable for them to obey the rule and confines their freedom of choice for clothes.

They add that school uniforms do not suit their individual life styles and needs.

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However, students should focus on studying, not dressing-up.

>> However, students should focus on studying, not on dressing-up.