Should there be strong punishment against racism?

Thank you for this [이름]nie. Very well said.

I don’t think that there should be any punishment against racism because racism is basically one kind of perception that people believe. 

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We haven’t punished any person because of their ideology or perspective. 

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To be honest, I think we have to admit some sort of feeling of alienation as a minority. 

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>>> OR: To be honest, I think we have to acknowledge that there is a sense of alienation towards the minority.    

It is natural that the majorities build their own society suited their own palate and the minorities feel excluded by the society.

>>> It is natural that the majorities would build their own society suited for their own palate and the minorities feel excluded in that society.   

However, there are two points that I want to emphasize: strong punishment against racism and education on the racism to change those perspectives. 

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Deciding the scale of punishment against racism is not focused on racism but on punishment against explicit violence. 

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It’s because we can’t judge personal thoughts on race in a law. 

>>>  OR: It’s because we can’t judge personal thoughts on race by law.    

But, at least, we should make a judgement considering their based intention towards other races like the cases when other crimes are judged by criminals’ intention.

>>> OR: But, at least, we should make a judgement considering their motives towards other races like the cases when other crimes are judged by criminals’ intention.   

Furthermore, here is the point. We are in a culture cultivated for a long history and we have been educated so far. 

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>>>  My point is, we are in a culture cultivated throughout a long history and we have been educated so far.    

And as we follow the society’s rules, we can keep the idea that the discrimination is wrong and that the violence is not a solution for their social and personal problem. 

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>> OR: And as we follow the society’s rules, we can keep the idea that discrimination is wrong and that violence is not a solution for their social and personal problem. 

The insists on racism can be depleted gradually with appropriate education and with subtle gentleness to the minorities. 

>>> The insistence on racism can be depleted gradually with appropriate education and with subtle gentleness to the minorities.   

Then the education will be the key to change.

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